Saturday, February 2, 2008
DP #5: American Priest, Global Samaritan
As the parable indirectly dictates by choosing a Priest and Levite to ignore the dying naked man and a Samaritan to give him aid, the list of first world countries giving global donations explains more about the U.S. in relation to the other countries than it directly tells. When looked at in depth, at least the first five countries (Sweden, Luxembourg, Norway, Netherlands, Denmark) on the list of twenty-two do not have, or are trying to reduce, a separation of church and state, boosting monotheistic (and dominately Bible-reading) religions. Also, the United States is the only country on the chart that does not practice socialized/universal healthcare, the only country able to see but not actually see. The U.S. places so low on the list because with a lack of practicing religions (or simply money-minded ones) and a health care program which demonstrates a "tribal ethic," our culture speaks to us: the homeless man is only sleeping; we fail to see human as human or to live with the lesson The Good Samaritan taught, "to be human is to respond to the sufferings of others with compassion."
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1) Thesis: indicates is better than dictates. Your use of the "As" to start leads me to think you will say or imply "so to" for the second half of the sentence. You are making a parallel between the parts of then sentence; but I've struggled mightily to see the connection. What does the choosing of the characters in the story tell us that is repeated in the second part of the sentence. It could just be me, but it's a struggle to find the relationship. Though it becomes clear as you develop your argument, you might want to make it a little more explicit and simple for people like me.
2) These are so fantastic as pieces of evidence that I'm smiling right now. I'm glad you did a little Quick and Dirty research to tackle this problem and then attempt to use this info constructively.
3) Your conclusion is a bit long and could be tightened up a bit. This is a run on. The idea that we are tribal and have not yet evolved with some other parts of the world is a good one. Last point, the lack of socialized medicine indicates that we are still tribal on some level, but this begs the question, which tribe is benefiting from the way things are currently structured? Who is in and who is out?
Overall, great work, just edit/tighten and make points quicker (even though its hard cuz you're trying to say so much in so little space.
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